This is the story of my life, all it needs is a soundtrack and an Oscar.
Lazarus, "Tonight I Sail", a very touching poem. Very good work as usual.
Thanks Tonya
The poem is cleverly written and easily relatable, I especially enjoyed the ending starting with: Silence embraces me. I would say it is similar to a couple of my poems, but not one in particular.
There may be a word or two similar...but the essence of your poems as a whole is similar.
Very good! It gave me a sense of freedom letting go! Thanks for the share!
This is insightful. It truly captures that feeling of just wanting the pain to end.
Yep...end or just go away, one way or another.
For a moment there was hope...I was saddened by the course chosen by--or for--the soul, though. Seems he gave up just when the moment arrived that would have lifted him back to life. The defining moment; the footstep that once taken cannot be reversed. Sad and powerful through your images.
Nice job again, Laz.
Hmmm, I'll try.
Good...be waiting.
Catch you later.
Later.