Good, interesting, I could hear the old guy talikng... was it a Texas twang...
Okay, first my heart....now my mind?! Not fair!
My mind is trying to understand what just happened and how you came up with it. Wow.
I was taking time to digest this, I still am. What?
I'll try.
:)
http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-lazarus-destined-to-be-his-bride/
This one is easier to read.
You sure know how to spin a tale, Laz. You have the gift, tis sure. LOL I loved it.
This was sort of an anti-vampire story....with a twist...of course. thanks.
Does the name Quasimodo ring a bell.
Ar ar
There's no mincing words, here; your language and setting descriptions were tight. I couldn't stop reading in the way you'd already set up the story and developed characters that play off one another well. Was intrigued. I'm not sure he is, Laz. Is he?
Ain't sayin'
Ooooooooooh! ;))
I might write a sequel.
That would be merciful to your readers, Laz. :))
hahaha
This was a REALLY good one, Laz.
There were some things that made me "WOW" as I read. "A friendly housefly came by and lit..." A great little, humorous and well-placed two sentences that added MORE life to the story (you're story:) The old codger was nicely displayed through his dialogue throughout:) Just another step up for you in this one!
The capper, though, was the WAY he defeated the anemic vamp, lol. Who woulda' thunk... Show more
Your comment brings tears to my eyes...lol. Thanks a lot!.
And n...it's not the garlic that wets my eyes
I've enjoyed tzatziki that would knock your socks off.
Lol. Nut!
Nuts...Yes I am...lol.
When I got to the part about all that garlic in the food, I thought the vampire might have bitten the guy, gotten poisoned by the garlic-tainted blood, and as he pulled out of the old guy's neck in a panic, one of his fangs got stuck. As usual, though, Judy gets way too complicated - the beautiful simplicity of garlic breath was a stroke of sheer genius!
I began grinning halfway through, and was giggling hysterically by the... Show more
Hahaha....thanks a bunch.
Zombies...hmmmm
Loved it! By the point where your narrator mentioned that Sam had his full attention ... you had mine! There was no way I was going to stop reading until I was finished. Thanks for the enjoyable tale!
Thank you. There's more other stories you might...no, will enjoy.