Good story, but you might want to add some spacing to make it easier for the reader. Some editing is needed too, I suggest downloading Ginger to help out with tense and word agreement, but all in all a good story.
Forever Yours
My Beginning By: Lanequa Paulinea Beckett Beckett, Lanequa BeckettKeywords:
Love, Heartbroken, Family, Depression, Future
Posts and Comments
Glynis Rankin
Okay, thanks
ツ ︀➞ WWW.FANTAZM.ONLINE?rz4d18bbaa01f25_1391531651.0670239925