Do you think maybe you can change the age range on it?
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Im over the age of 18 but it's not letting me read it.
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The book is well thought out and the story line keeps a reader interested. My only critique of your effort would be a sense of broken English usage throughout. Your grasp of the language is sufficient to hold a readers interest but it lacks polish. Perhaps we may benefit from a mutual solution.
And now I must read your sequel to this novel.
that was a sad but awsome story but to extreme ,but it was awsome.
this book a little bit too much information but its a very good book keep it up and keep writing