BookRix

Please update this book I want to know what happens please....

Both wickedly delightful, and scary as hell.

yummy

Oh LD, you smoothy. You create pictures in the mind's eye with your lustful writings then throw in a twist of good old originality. You are a creative thinker. I enjoyed that short romp with glee. Please keep coming up with your offerings. I'm sure all your fans would agree.

Sexy and Creepy. I like :)

This story has a clever twist ending. It is a bit frightening to think of such an outcome. Lol! The scenario was sexy and delivered with mouth-watering efficiency. Makes me want a gingerbread man cookie. Best wishes with the contest!

I liked the story but not sure what the original title was. The misspelled words did detract from it a bit as well.

Good story for the erotic fairytale contest. Good Luck