I like it :)
I feel so sorry for her though :(
ok i see where you are going with this keep it up
I voted for your book, because the story was good. It was well thought out, and well written.
The two things, if you want people to vote for your book, you might consider putting a link to your book in the request for votes. That way it is less work to find and read your book.
The other thing, the background, and the red type together made the book hard to read, and hard on the eyes.
You should change one or the other to make it... Show more
Review - This was a quick and simple story that spoke of a very sad subject. You did a good job of showing the vicious cycle of of how the victims are pulled in again and again. Your victim finds the strength to pull away, to start the healing process. I liked how you put a goodly amount of her thought process of missing her parents and feeling alone. It needs a bit more of a turning point, more of thought process of why she... Show more
