Very good, I liked it. However, I wouldn't have minded hearing a little of Christina's personal history at the beginning. Will be dropping by for part 2. Yay!
An intriguing read, Leshea...and you do "battle" scenes so well! When do we get to see part two? :)
Wow, I'm very impressed! I agree with rgabel. I really love the plot, and the way you wrote it. I can't wait to read more if you choose to write more!
Amazing!! Hope to be able to write as well as you some day. :)