thanks very much, Robynn, for such a commentary of my short novel, or at least a part of it, the beginning of the first shapter. it´s a pity that my english is not specific enough to get it well translated into your leanguage. i´m working on the whole translation and if you like i´ll mail you my english version with some problably wrong elements i could not get over well enough. Appreciate your descriptions of what you have... Show more
Your short bursts of word combinations created such thought processes. I had to read it twice and will read again, to grasp all of the mind pictures and questions your prose creates. I'm still debating the souls of animals, if they truly love. How each moment can be mundane, or highly sensory. True poetry, true emotion. Extremely well done. Thank you. Robynn