because the blurb sounds interesting, but there are too many spelling mistakes and it's too distracting and hard to read.
for example, in the first paragraph:
"chimmy" = "chimney"
"Sighning" = "sighing" wrong more than once
"stronge" = "strong"
"childeren" = "children"
"rooten" = "rotten"
"singled" = "signaled"
so maybe you should put your story into microsoft word or something to use the spell check.
let me know after you fix it up so i can read it!
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