Thanks :) I have made some corrections and added some more chapters..lol..I know I am going to have to back through the next two chapters as well but I am getting it out here for now :) I am not sure how I am liking this story so far, at first I thought yes this is starting off great but the further I go seems like it is tapering off:( lol
I will go back through here and make some changes and when I add more I will have to ask for your opinion again:)
I am trying to go for a heartbreaking story that turns to love or the very least strong friendship...Thank you so much again for leaving a comment for my book :)