Her First Lover

By:
kimmyj79
User: kimmyj79
Her First Lover
Brandy dates men until she is tired of them or they want something from her, that she is not ready to give. Brandy is a virgin and she is not ready to give that up yet.
One night her and the girls go to the bar and take their guy friend, Does Brandy fall in love? Does she give Chris her gift?

  • Erotic
  • 3840 Words
  • Ages 18 and up
  • 583
  • 23
  • Publication Date: 02-17-2012
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Deleted User

OMG! Hot! So damn hot! You caught the very essence of the act in such an exquisite manner! Quite an enjoyable read... and I don't recall any errors but i am sure there were a few. Beautifully rendered and a pleasure to read.

thrillerlover5
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thrillerlover5

I think that this was great...again I think that you need to talk about say the sun being bright and shining on things...or it could be so dark you could barely see in front of you...lol...
Just trying to help..love ya :)

kimmyj79
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kimmyj79

I know there is some things that need to be fixed..I will be weeding the bad out asap..I am sorry to do this to guys again but I think I am going back to first person and then going to finish the book :)

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