It was funny. But try using a funny title to capture the reader I was thinking the book would be of tips And advice good book. Have you thought about writing a serious book
This was funny :) Though it didn't make me laugh out loud, it did make me smirk slightly. So well done. This was a fun read.
However, you did have several spelling errors along with past/present-tense mix ups. In the beginning of the book you had a word wrong ("threw" instead of "throw") and that really threw off the smoothness of the piece. So make sure you go through and edit all those mistakes out. Spell check will probably... Show more