Inversion

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Inversion

This is the inversion, in which I make a choice and it's just not the same.

 

Allyra King never meant to do a lot of things. She never meant to be guilted into going to the party. She never meant to get drunk. She never meant to call her brother. She never meant for him to die. But reality does not reflect intentions. Ally knows that far too well. And so does her father. Mitchell King never meant to do a lot of things. He never meant to blame Ally for his son’s death. He never meant to wish her dead. He never meant for his wish to come true.

 

One fateful night and five words later, Ally’s life is turned upside down when she runs into the mysterious and enigmatic Cian Sampson, a boy who seems to know everything there is to know about her. With the help of Cian—and just a little bit of the impossible—Allyra King transforms into Lyra, just Lyra, and sets about trying to right her wrongs.


  • Romance
  • 1884 Words
  • Ages 14 and up
  • 353
  • 5
  • Publication Date: 06-20-2016
Keywords: 
death, life, family, love, music
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Sakshiii
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Sakshiii

This book is great and vivid. I loved it. ^_^
Keep up the good work!

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illusoire
illusoire

Thank you so much! :)

Sakshiii
Sakshiii

You're welcome! :)

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felixthecat
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felixthecat

Finally--I hate to use that word, but yes--finally I run across a work that captures my imagination and interest totally here. It doesn't take long to discover whether a writer, journeyman or otherwise, has studied the craft and mastered the key elements of prose construction.

Kudos.

I love some of the asides, many of the excellently placed descriptions, ie., dad entering the bedroom in his new angry, drunken condition.... Show more

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illusoire
illusoire

Thank you so much! This really means a lot to me, and I've also fixed the mistakes you pointed out.

felixthecat
felixthecat

YVW, and I never state them as mistakes, rather as things you might want to consider looking at in rewrite:)

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