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I like the new addition. It sounds very good. I saved your book to my favorites the other day because it really intrigues me.
This is a promising beginning of what could become an awesome mystery tale. It drew me in immediately, as I love suspense tales set in London. I also adore gothic mansion novels, too. It sounds like the Victorian era of the 1800's. Please, add more to this intriguing book and let me know when you do. Your descriptions are attentive. The dialogue is very well written. Great job!
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mysterywriter723
My only suggestion, if I may, is to add a space in between sentences. Otherwise, a wonderful effort.
Katie187
Thank you for your kind words! Any advice is wonderful thank you for letting me know that :)
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