BookRix

Yes I know it does jump around alot, but this is like a little preview of it. I am working on the full thing. I do edit it a little here and there and make it less jumpy. I'm glad you like it though and thank you for the honest opinion!

-Ley

I love the storyline butit needs some work on the flow of the book. I dont want to hurt your feelings, but it does need some work. But you have a purfect idea! come look at my book soon!

Very interesting story & expressed beautifully.

found the misspelled mira

you like it? wow thanks I didn't think you would lol. I have been looking for the misspelled Mira. I spelled it Mirs if you find it please tell it to go home its mom if worried.LOL no really if you find it please tell me so I can fix it.

Thanks!
-Ley

wow awesome

Sorry about type errors if you find any please tell me. I know there are a few in the description. I am not the strongest speller.

Thanks,
-Ley