Talk To Me

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kaishi
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Talk To Me
A young boy is a pickpocket on the streets of London. But when he gets caught stealing a watch from the richest man in London. His World changes.

  • Adventure
  • 2451 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 616
  • 1
  • Publication Date: 11-01-2012
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lyraboraguard
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lyraboraguard

i suggest not switching from third to first person, it's confusing. other than that its good :D

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I LOVE this book. It is amazing!

indie23
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indie23

You have a good dtory hrre, but there are some missing words and some of the sentences needs to be exyended a little more. Other than that, good job. :)

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