For sheer originality, you take the cake..or the prize. You said it all, even using the same words. Very clever indeed.
But if a picture is worth... something-er-other... you're way over the word count.
Excellent job and perfectly Kade (which has become a compliment 'round here for things made well)!
Got me:)
There wasn't a sentence in the lot, but it's a powerfully unique story! You are cutting-edge, Kade! With work like this, I see the future of writing beginning to emerge. Just really great!
Now be kind to Marc; he's learning like the rest of us:)
A winner.
Not because of the beautiful presentation but because it really did tell a story.
Fabulous!! Bloody Fabulous!!!!
Wendyxxx
It's cool, like those flip books we made in school. Except the art is so much better!!! Professional.