NOTHING TO SAY THIS BOOK MAKE ME STUNNED BECAUSE OF IT'S CHARMING UUNDERSTANDABLE LANGUAGE
How intriguing! I agree with L. Avery Brown on this one, it screams potential and make me longer,lol!
You know what - I think I'm going to use it as my entry in NaNoWriMo. Since it's just a snippet, I think it would be okay to use for that. I mean, it's not like I've been pondering this plot line for months and had written several chapters already. Were that the case, using it... Show more
Read it - liked it. What an interesting concept. I think you could expand the heck out of that one.
And I'm assuming that Anna/Mira has a little MPD thing going on? I just have to know what actually happened to get the human race to the point where there's a 'pairing' event that's so brutal.
LOVED IT!
Beethoven rocks.
I had a feeling we've only seen a glimpse of your talent. Frustrating, isn't it, lol. And to think that if Adam had just said, "No thanks" to Eve, we'd be living hundreds of years...
Not too late. But again, I think you already know that.
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Wow, thank you! I really appreciate that! ')