Yeah, he skulked off somewhere, probably cluttering up the dark alleys of the City. You're right, though - I should send someone to go check up on him, see what wastrelly stuff he's gotten into now, lol! Hmm. Maybe I'll do a sequel?
Anyway, thank you, Mary! You're one of my favorite writers here, so praise from you gives me bouquets of smiles!
And crystalsun, you're very, very kind, and I'm very, very grateful for your... Show more
I read the entire thing in just under a day. I felt like I was reading something written back in the early 1900s- the details regarding the clothes and decor are reminiscent of Anne of Green Gables or something like that. The plot twists were great as well. Though I do want to know what happened to a certain conniving character in the end- you don't say where he went after, or what happened to him.
Anywho... well done! :)
Another one of your bests. :) I really enjoyed it as much as your last one. You are very talented in your description, details etc. Well done and I look forward to more of your work! I am only currently on pabe 12 but I am hooked. Thanks!
I appreciate that so much! Romance isn't a genre I'm accustomed to writing in so it means a whole lot to get positive feedback on my attempt. Thanks! =D
Well written, description of everything was great. Look forward to more of your writings
Review - I had to laugh. After your opening description, I thought maybe this would be more of a spoof on romance tales. Though it has some of the basic platform that romance stories use, I found you have mastered the craft quite artfully!
Very well done. You could be a romance writer of the highest caliber. Got my vote! Excellent job. Robynn
Wow, I am only on page 8th page on this book, and it's already amazing, and very descriptive
Keep up the good work :)
I have only had 3 boyfriends in my 43 years on this Earth because a lot of guys only wanted 1 thing and I won't give it without being in it for the long haul.
Good for you! Stick to your guns - too bad more of our young women don't think that way.
My mom and dad taught me that you never cheat on the guy you are with.