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Thank you! I have so many things going on right now, I haven't had time to update this, but others have been asking me to do the same, so as soon as I can, I'll get back to it. I really appreciate your encouraging feedback! ')

Thank you, my friend. You are most kind. ')

Wow, thank you! This is my first attempt at writing a mystery novel, so I'm greatly encouraged that the beginning got your interest.

I'd be delighted to read your story! I have to run a few errands and take my daughter to the doctor, but when I get back, reading your story will be the first thing I do. Thanks again! ')

I just realized something. The whole point of the scene isn't the scene itself, but to introduce the main character, Gargoyle. I was going to put one of those asterisk divider things after the last sentence and begin another section in which the reader meets him. Without that context, I can see how you'd feel more set-up should be given. When I write that next section, maybe you can go over the whole thing again and see if it works. If not, I'll probably re-think that intro part.

Thank you for taking the time to consider all this! ')

No problem and I don't see why I wouldn't be able to, just make sure to let me know when you update it. Also on a side note I will be uploading an edited version of Killing's The Only Solution soon, as well as two more poems in the Poetry of Følelser.

Awesome - I look forward to reading them!