BookRix

I am a little late to the party but better late than never, right?

Another incredible short - delivered with style and suspense.

Loved it!

There were so many ways this story could have gone.. I love the twist at the end! Leaving us with our mouth open!!! :)

I love this song, but I wouldn't have been able to turn it into this suspenseful amazing, story that you have!
Good luck in the Sing A Song v.2 Contest.
-me ;P

I thought to myself, "I love that song," but I assumed it had nothing to do with it, until I saw your sub title, "The Who." I love The Who and I think that song is so beautiful and sad. I love your story - I had no idea where it was going and the ending really surprised me. The somewhat cryptic dialogue from the man drinking at the bar just added to the general feel of the story.

I really enjoyed it - great job Judy!

I had no idea why this story was written...at first. Why some of the lines were in bold. Familiar lines, but other than the mention of Crystal Gayle's great song...they eluded me.
And yet, I was once again entranced by the storyline; how you have this ability to sustain pace and flow and in this case, tension.
I find it remarkable that you were able to use the various phrases drawn out of The Who's classic song. Had they not been bolded, I would read through just as easily...how nicely you wove them into the dialogue!
Among my favorite phrases, though, is an example of sheer craftsmanship in storytelling: "A shadow detached from the side of the building and walked..." Detached? Wow! The visual you create with those kinds of narrative images! So exceptional.
Bravo, Judy.