Damn. This was great. You are amazing at adding details to help enhance the plot. I can't believe that I am beginning to read this now.
AWESOME! I can't wait for more. I got so very lost in each of the characters that the 62 pages flew by much too quickly. Very good character development. Love the storyline. I see why my blurb sounded familiar to you. I am so looking forward to the rest of the story!
I'm honored that you read it so soon! I'm also thrilled that you liked it - especially since you're such a good writer! Now I'm encouraged to start adding to it; the story got stalled by my having to do some more research on the Tigua tribe, but I think I found what I need. I'll... Show more
I was blown away by the first two pages alone! You can WRITE! If I would have picked this book up in the store- I would have been carrying it to the cash register. You truly are gifted- and that is a rare find on this site. I cant wait to finish it, I'm on page 37, and then get to your other books!
Great job!
C.B.
Thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it that much - wow. Your encouragement means lots, and I'm honored that you want to read my other work, too. As Yoda might have put it, "Made my day, you did!" xD
Now you have to finish! I'm from El Paso!
I did enjoy your book thus far and look forward to the rest.
Oh, my! Really? Thank you so much! I just wonder - since you're from that area, were my descriptions accurate? Also, what do you know about the Tigua (where and how they live, their culture and stories, beliefs, etc.). That's the part I'm at now, where Shane meets Lorenso's... Show more
Oh Judy, this is fantastic. I have spent the last hour reading this and am blown away, truly!! What a wonderful start to a science fiction novel that I KNOW is going to be spectacular. I love your characters, care for them, and cannot wait for them to meet each other and interact. Please email me when you have more uploaded. I cannot wait to read the next installment. Great job.
Once again you've blown me away with your kind words and enthusiasm! You've encouraged me to keep going with the story, which means I have to do some deeper digging into the Tigua culture in order to finish the current chapter (an undertaking I'll enjoy - I love doing research).... Show more
Thank you! I guess I should get busy adding to it - I really didn't think anyone, recently, anyway, had even read it, much less liked it. So thank you so much!