Important Post
A little late for a Christmas story, but nonetheless...
I loved it! I loved the ending- totally took me by surprise. Writing is as well-done as ever. I figured out the identity of Joshua as soon as you said his full name (and thus the shot-taking scene amused me greatly). Way to go. :)
Your stories possess some quality that is so professional and polished. Maybe it's the dialogue. It flows so well. You deliver your ides so well.
very nice