nice i like the cute story but you can extend this to make it sound even better^_^ but WELL DONE
ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job! very sweet and moving, i can't help but love it!
ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job! very sweet and moving, i can't help but love it!
ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job! very sweet and moving, i can't help but love it!
ok, so the writing skill may need a bit of work but its so sweet! if you add a bit more detail and things like that then it would be better but you got my attention the whole way through which is rare so good job! very sweet and moving, i can't help but love it!