That chapter was good, but it was too short! I know that writing can take a while, but come on! You can't just write a chapter like that and not write more!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE
I don't often read Vampire, Werewolf, or Shape-shifter stories or books, but damn, I'm glad I read this one, Jessica.
I always say that genre is secondary. The most important thing about ANY story, in any genre is that the writer shows confidence, knows the language and how BEST to utilize it.
Good grief...you REALLY do:)
Congratulations...I'll be reading more, if for no other reason than to roll in the wonder of your voice and... Show more
I really enjoyed the story so far, I'll be waiting to read more.
Calm down! It's just a sample. I'm definitely adding more.
WHY is it only 9 pages long?! IT NEEDS MORE STORY!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
WRITE MORE!!
Creative, and full of suspense. So many questions and so many possible answers. Great writing, flowing easily and effectively. You have the reader on edge, give us more!
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