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That was really realistic! I love it

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I loved it, wished we could know what happens to her. Really realistic. I could hear and see it all.

A thousand thanks for the tremendous comments!

Woaw, frightful. Seems like a potential idea for a new plot. A lot of things were said and in only a 100 words. I could hear the ear-piercing scream and I could see the devilish look on Danny's face. Nice job.

Thanks guys! Even if it doesn't make it to the top ten or whatever, I'm just hoping it'll be read and maybe make people want to read my other books.

sounds good to me are thinking about making it into book later? if you do let me know good luck

You described, perfectly the date from hell.
Chris :)

a lot said about life in 100 words