You've made my night with your kind words. I describe the world in the second chapter. I still have some tweaking to do with what I already have and finishing it. This is why I'm glad I found this site. I love the type of people here and hope I can return the favor you all have given me. I'm looking forward to reading some of your work.
With an open mind and sincere heart always; Jessica
First Welcome to bookrix.
This is a very exciting book. Well written. You jumped right into the action, and I appreciated the commentaries in the story about the characters.
I have no constructive criticism right now other than to say, I would like to know more about this world.
You paint a beautiful picture of Aurora, what about the world she lives in.
I just read chapter one, so if you describe the world later I will look... Show more