BookRix

JESSICA I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR BOOK, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NERXT BOOK.

it was so good and i didn't care about you error cause i still new what you were talking about. i can't wait for you to finish it i can't wait to read more.

your grammer needs alot of work ! it an ok story but your tenses are all over the place

A horrifying tale, isn't it? But one that we see, hear or read about on a sickeningly regular basis nowadays. I love where you are coming from with this and I am avidly awaiting to see where you will take it.

However I am distressed by the number of grammar inaccuracies not to mention tense inconsistencies.

Clear these two issues up and yours will be a real gem.

UGH I want more!!!!

i am trying to finish the book , ita alotta man hours working and school on time, i will be hopefully finishing it by the end of the month. check back

i am trying to finish the book , ita alotta man hours working and school on time, i will be hopefully finishing it by the end of the month. check back

thank you i am intrested in finishing it soon and the errors i know, grammer is not my thing but imagination is so i will work on the grammer

i wanna read more! what happens next?

couldn't get past the first page. too many errors. definitely want to read it when it's done, though!