Not to mention his sister just gave birth to a completely healthy baby off of one ovary...
This is something I am going through right now, however I am only 22 and feel as though I am still much too young to start the testing and all the science behind it but this is my biggest fear in life because I want to be a mother so bad that I can feel my heart hurt sometimes. All I want is to make my husband a father. He's one of 12 kids and has 38 nieces and nephews. He has sisters approaching 40 that are still having... Show more
This is a heart-retching story. You did an excellent job showing the fear in the woman's mind and all the thoughts darting by.
There were some little typos and awkward sentences, but other than that this was pretty good. You've really showed a fear that looms over every woman as they grow older.
Bravo.
Awesome job!
Keep writing!
---RbG
I think this was my favorite in the "Biggest Fear" contest.
Not only was the story heart breaking, I thought it was extremely well written.
Keep up the good work!
of hope/longing/fear/bitterness/despair. i'm feeling the cosmic injustice.
Jess,
You have written a very touching and involved story about being unable to conceive. It kept my attention from beginning to end. Best wishes in the contest.
Great writing!