Resting Spot

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Resting Spot
A young boy walks home from school alone. He stops half way home to rest and have a snack out of his lunch box. But on this particular day, he gets a pleasant surprise.

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jenjen1132

This was really a sweet book. it's the perfect beginning of a friendship--and maybe more than that---for the main character.
I really enjoyed it!

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crosswaysnet

after re-reading a few times, i concluded that each episode is strong enough to stand on its own, and you managed to blend them into an even stronger story together.

good job.

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felixthecat

You have a definite gift for storytelling. I loved the innocence of this piece; the nice, nice upbeat ending.
I have to agree with crossways net on this one, however. Eliminating any of the three would weaken the overall "story arc", I think. But again, the images and conciseness are exceptional.

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crosswaysnet

Sweet coming of age story - well done! but still not sure if it fits the criteria of the contest...

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