Poison
a girl who tries to commit and it suicide failed the first time but she is trying to get better... but will she?

  • Fiction
  • 3696 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 569
  • 3
  • Publication Date: 04-10-2011
Keywords: 
suicide, jinx, death
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kennadmm
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kennadmm

cool

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dimensiondoll
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dimensiondoll

Obviously, you need to fix some grammatical errors--your sentences need restructuring also. Too much dialog and not enough description. I cannot grasp the full picture your trying to depict in your writing.

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