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I like it! It made me feel like I was trapped.

It's like being there in hopelessness and in desperation.
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Quite good. Being written in 1st person present combined with the repetition lent a poetic sense to the story. The suspense of Poe meets the cadence of Homer.
It's quiet in my house right now and everyone is asleep, so I can't test it, but I'd bet this is the type of story that is best when spoken aloud.

With so little information, you've managed to make my imagination run away with itself! Very chilling...nice work!

Very chilling. adding to my favs

Isolation begins on a high note of tension and the feeling of hopelessness. It doesn't let up. As I read it, I was cold and lonely--to the point of despair. Such is the excellence of the narrative. This Flash is definitely a contender. I'm glad I found it.