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it's an enjoyable read :)

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You definitely have a talent for weaving a story, and I was drawn into the lives of Abel and Sandy. Your storyline is good and the pacing and flow are also good. I would advise you to go back to the beginning and correct spelling mistakes and, more importantly, errors in tenses. There are numerous occasions when you use the present tense instead of the past. These are minor and can be cured with good editing. I look forward very much to reading the rest of the story. All the best with this very lovely story. You have my vote.

I can hardly wait to find out more! They are off to a great adventure after tragedy and this is a wonderful way to overcome grief for Abel and Sandy. I will be ordering this book soon.

Very easy read. Descriptions are vivid and realistic, making it easy to insert yourself into the story. Looking forward to reading more! Great job!

This is good. Im not a reader but I can read this I want to know what happends next. You keep the reader intrested. Good work.
Laura

I really appreciated your comments. Thank you so much.'Jeffrey White