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I like it! It's romantic and shows a lot of promise. The only thing is it's so short! I think you should make it longer and add some story to it, make it more suspenseful! Don't get me wrong, I love your little story. I just wish it was a lil' longer. If you could do that, I would love you forever! OMGness, I just love mermaids!
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Tala Nightwolf
I would have to agree I read it to my 6 year olf sis and she loved it she thought it was funny and she just loved it lol
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