Anyways, I meant to say more. I thought your poems were beautifully written, even if you're hurting. Pain is a difficult thing to deal with. Many of us has gone through it, but we find a way to pull through, in time. I hope everything works out for you.
Anyways, Good Job!
Indira
Review - You obviously have the feeling of pain down pat. Yet, without salt, we don't know what is sweet. Without cold, we don't appreciate the heat. Without sorrow, we can't understand the depth of joy. We must traverse the night to meet the dawn.
Your heart ache will be softened by joy and love, just don't know when. Beautiful, strong, strident poetry. Keep on writing your feelings down. It helps the healing. Good job. Robynn
how it works for me unfortunatly. I write the best poetry when I am hurting inside.... which is why I write so much poetry... that is considered good. Thank you for commenting.
But if you DON'T put your heart out there on the line, you live only half a life.
Felt your pain in all three poems...yes :(
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