BookRix

by the way, i realized that you've been a member since my last birthday. haha.

wow! such good writing for someone your age. your on the right track. Good grammar too.

I like how it flowed, and with no errors. Some older writers should take note.

Thanks for all the comments and I'm glad you liked this book. :)

enjoyed it

Your sister must be really proud of you.
Your plot is lovely.
Hope you continue writing.
Chris

This book is dedicated to my sister and is for her birthday. Hope you enjoy it!