This poem makes me think of the Monet painting “Water Lilies” and of fairies granting blessings to the spring. I get my imagination moving. “Few mortals are gifted with the sight of her,” is a lovely and honest depiction of how society often doesn’t see anything that isn’t loud and up front in its face.
Review - Definitely a dance of words. You have described a water sprite quiet beautifully. It was nice to see you have some wonderful thoughts, instead of the sad you seem so good at.
This is a enchanting poem. The artwork behind it sets it up well. Wonderful Job Jazz. Robynn
WOw! I'm not into poetry, but this I like it. keep up the good work :)
Jasmine,
Written with such emotion. Beautiful, but sad. I love the illustrations and the poem.
Excellent writing!
this one took a shorter time to make than I expected. My best work yet huh? I liked "Hope Left" more... but that is probably because that one took a few weeks while this one only took a few days... oh that reminds me... I need to put up the picture version of that poem on Monday... someone remind me of that...lol.
well, I was inspired. the idea came from a random question that popped up onto my site (not ready yet). it asked... Show more
It's a lovely poem. How you describe her is really beautiful.
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