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I find these poems harder to read than your collection titled PAIN. In these I can sense your longing for freedom. And I can relate, although in a different way. I have RA and the pain often kicks my butt. I often feel trapped and alone, and to be honest when I read WIND I cried, it really captures the longing I know and feel daily. You are very talented. I absolutely love these poems!

You are quite talented, keep writing! :)

Your poems created visions in my minds eye. Beautifully written.
Chris

Thanks.
I don't write much rough poetry because I like each line to flow smoothly into the next.

WHERE!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! (I cannot stand misspelling anything.)

First of all, your cover is excellent and speaks to the three poems wonderfully, I think.

But secondly, I was expecting something very rough. I was so surprised! Your formatting of the poems works in a nice way, heightening the impact of the thoughts.

Your images are splendid. You have a knack for using the right words to play them up:)

All three are unified in their theme. Very GOOD writing for someone so young. Kudos.

I think I saw one misspelled word, though I'd have to go back and read again to find it.

Just really nice.

I didn't have any inspiration, at least not any people. I just use the feelings I have and put them into my poems. Some take a few minutes, while one poem I made was short but took 2 hours to make because I wanted to make it perfect.

That was really good! Where did you get your inspiration from. The description was great too.