this is one of the best books ever. i hope you keep writing books!:):]<3
You lost me on the first sentence. It was the biggest contradiction. "I don't if my mom will ever come back but I do know that she will come back." You should really proofread your work and try to do better on creating sentences. You have a good story line you just need to edit your writing before you post it. Hope you continue to write!! I never want to discourage anyone from writing. It is the most beautiful form of... Show more
Sorry, but this book is terrible. I didn't understand it.
this book is awful. the writing is horrible. i can't understand half of it because the author needs to go back to school and learn how to write proper english.
OMG Please say this isn't the end of the book, if not can you please write more its such a great book. :)
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