THUMP

Just a sliver... By:
THUMP
The story is a sliver of a novel. The chapter follows our narrator along a train ride while the woman next to him sends him into another world...

  • Romance
  • 3239 Words
  • Ages 18 and up
  • 1029
  • 35
  • Publication Date: 11-12-2009
Keywords: 
Train, Travel, Love, Sex, Romance
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beccabook
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beccabook

It seems intresting, but confusing for me. Not my type of book, but I like how you write, describing everything, thinking of everyting.

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johnginnetti
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johnginnetti

Excellent,it started slow and easy it kept me there I counldn't look away, my
kind of story "Nice Work"!Keep writing
you're good
Thank You,
John Ginnett

P.S. keep them coming I'll keep reading
them.

johnginnetti
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johnginnetti

excellent,it lead me in and kept
me ,I couldn't let go till the doors slam shut"Great Story".
THUMP you kept me reading I could not look away
Thank You,
John Ginnetti

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