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Your story is like a journey into another world. You clearly have a descriptive knack when it comes to setting scenes. The events are at once scary and exciting. Excellent work!
Aside from a few missing words I loved it. The descriptions were great and I really like how fast the pace is with the story. I can't wait to read more :)
-S.XIII
I really enjoyed this, The prologue hooked me with your description. On issue have a proof reader go over your work, it is missing words in some spots due to fast writing, I have the same problem the brain writing quicker than the hands Overall is dark and gorgeous and I cannot wait for more, also your cover is stunning.
that seems to be an opening for the remaining story.
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