Dang. Wish I'd had stuff like that happen to me when I was a freshman, lol! Cute story, good possibilities. Keep it going, add some kind of real conflict (other than just mentioning the "mean" kids, maybe have them do something mean or threatening), and you'll have yourself an excellent young adult romance! Way to go!
If you are truly only twelve years old, I am very impressed with your writing skills. Spelling, grammar and sentence structure were very mature and well written. I'd like to have seen a little more "conflict" in your story to engage me, but on the whole I would say 'WELL DONE'.
Valerie
good book, you should start telling ppl about this book so they read it....a helpful tip!
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