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Thank you for pointing that out to me, I have always thought something was odd when i re-read it myself from time to time, it never registered, I see what you mean after going back to look at it once I read your comments, I intend to go back and change that, thanks for the good eye, and I am pleased you are enjoying this book, soon I will add some more chapters, this book though is far from finished, is still work in progress, unfortunately Real life daily stresses keep me from being able to devote the time I would love to spend on it, if only I could get paid to sit around and write all the time, that would be great :) thanks again, and feel free to add me as friend, I look forward to more of your points of view on future chapters..have a great day!

Jackie,
I just finished reading the first 10 chapters and really enjoyed the dialog and banter exchange... the flow of the book really takes off until page 20 when you jumped out of first person and became an observer I found it distrating.
This happens again on pg. 26 at the begining of Chapter 5 and thruought the remaining chapters...

On page 28 the girls just appear as does the food no explanation but later on you explain each character and their relationship to one another admirably.

I really enjoyed the way you showed the past in memories... after all that is how we see people and places after a long time and I enjoyed the journey you brought me on... and look forward to more chapters... thank you for sharing this with me and others.

You are very talented in how you understand the complexaties of high school friendships and the bonds that stretch beyond the years.

Keep up the good work.