Good one, but like my comment on your other story, you could write more on this. The characters seemed interesting and there are so many questions left unanswered, so I think it wouldn't hurt writing a longer version :)
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im glad u liked it ^^ i was writing random stuff to enter in the contest but i didnt rly hav a story plot. srrry. i am writing more tho. thank you very much :)
more!!!! write more. who'd she fall for? did the shadow die? so many questions, not many answers!!!!!!!!1