This is such a sweet story I loved the way it all came together without being forced
Here is my story from the swap shop enjoy and read when you can
http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-c-kelemen-the-winter-mill-murder/
Another beautifully written, heart-wrenching story. You mentioned this one was published somewhere already? Are you going to publish it again - perhaps in a compilation of shorts???
Yes, ma'am, that's my next project. I'm going to put together an anthology of fifteen of my short stories, and this one will definitely be included.
15! Wow! Not I'm really excited!
OMGoodness, I love the way you segway from the definition of "the butterfly effect" straight into the story. Superbly done and well-crafted... This is a powerful story that reminds me being kind to others for goodness sake and the Universe always brings our good deeds back to us. Loved the story; it made me cry...
It is not often that I re-read something, but this was definitely worth it. Thanks for this wonderful story. I would like to read more about Jake, and the Girl with the pretty Legs.
Perhaps they will meet again sometime.
Thanks for the comments Ken; they were quite a pair. And you could be on to something. Rachel could go through life's adventures with Jake permanently assigned as her "guardian angel".
Reveiw - Darn it! You made me cry! Call me simplistic, but I love stories like this. It flows so smoothly. Just enough info. Loved the 'stick to consciousness' phrase. This is worthy of a short story contest. You wove dignity, mystery and human emotion well into this little story. Excellent job. Robynn
I looked up your book, The Girl with...
I didn't remember having read it or giving you a comment on it. Well, at least I have now.
I think you may have had me mixed up with someone else, or perhaps It was the books you had mixed up.
I read your book though, and I liked it very much.
It really pays to be kind to your fellow human being. Even if nothing like what happened to Rachel happens. Still I believe God blesses us for our... Show more