I enjoyed this short story and really empathised with the moral and message it contained.
A truly touching and realistic story. I felt like crying through part of it. It was so heartbreaking... and the end just wrapped it up in such a beautiful way. Absolutely amazing. Keep on writing. I look forward to reading more of your books.
Wonderful, I loved it! Great job on a short story. Grabs you from the first sentence and keeps you on the edge. Evokes powerful emotions and I just love the end with the Angels Gabriel and Micheal being sent to minister to the dieing and prepare them for going home to heaven. Good inspirational writing keep up the great work! od Bless Rev. Jen
The book is beautiful, I almost cried. Well done and congratulations on a fantastic book. :)
I really thought that was a very excellent piece. You seemed to create the atmosphere very well and evoked the emotions required to make this read a very emotional piece. I was unsure if Michael and/or Gabriel were angels, but never the less it was excellent.
Well done
My mom recommended this book to me and I have to say it was fantastic. I am going to definitely take a look at all your other stories. It made me cry - you are one terrific writer.
