It was a good book, but in the first page, wander should be wondered. it shouldnt say Jenna looked down at the jagged rocks and wander what would happen. Either than that it was a good read!
I got confussed in the first copple of chapters. But it was good in the end. ^^
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Would love to read it, however, it is "x" rated and therefore not accessible to whom they consider minors, such as myself. What about it makes it "x" rated if I might ask, because it sounds like a good read, although I wouldn't know, unforutnately. :(
thanks for the feedback i will try and edit a bit and work some things out if you have any suggestions i would love to hear them.