Vampire's Love

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Vampire's Love
What does a small and peaceful town like Crescent Heights have that always attracts evil?
Selena knows that trusting a vampire and a rogue vampire in that,is off limits but her heart says something else? whom will she trust, head or heart?
Evan wants Selena to save his brother but finding his mate in her complicates things...Will he sacrifice his mate to keep his promise to his brother?
Janet is a girl who thinks that marriage is a piece of arrangement but Alec is something that she didn't expect who brings lots of troubles along with him. Will the love blossom b/w them?
Alec had waited all these years for this little witch, what were his plans for Janet?

  • Fantasy
  • 7733 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 862
  • 20
  • Publication Date: 01-17-2012
Keywords: 
vampire, moon, sun, love
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Rgabel
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Rgabel

Hima, you are really coming into your own. This is very good. I'm so proud of how you have worked hard on grammar, spelling and punctuation.

Changing View Points is a challenge. It takes practice. In a few places you struggled, but I understand. I have trouble with it myself.

To break a scene and go to another point of view put ********* (as-tricks) between the scenes. This tells your reader there is a change coming.

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goldfishlover
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goldfishlover

At times, it was hard to follow because I didn't know who was speaking, but others, I could easily visualize everything. Like when Selena described Evan, I could easily imagine a gorgeous man with honey eyes. Or when Evan mated with Selena. That too, was easy to follow. Keep me updated!

sami13
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sami13

write more plezz its good

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