Please update. I need to know what happens!!
Hima, I congratulate you for writing a long story in what is apparently your second language. I cannot imagine writing something in Hindi, so you are to be commended. The story was good, and that is the most important part. Without a good plot, the reader becomes bored....so you did well there.
Many native born English speaking people cannot write a coherent sentence, so I shall not nitpick over your sentence structure and... Show more
Oh my gosh Hima, you have done such a great job with this one. Your sentences, spelling, punctuation is getting so very, very good.
Way to go! I'm so very proud of you. Besides it is also a very good and intriguing story. You are writing about what you know, your world, your surroundings. So this story has a real feel to it.
We are getting a glimpse into your culture. Excellent job, keep up the good work!!! Robynn
@ lazarus and @felix the cat :It's good to hear that u have seen the best part of India, dishes,lol.
People who have been to India will never forget the spicy and yummy dishes.
thanks for the comments :)
I confess, I haven't finished reading it all, but what I must say...I like this for many reasons.
During Expo 67 I worked in the kitchen at an Indian restaurant at the India pavilion. The food was out of this world. And the people super friendly. The men I worked for were Mr. Khan a and Mr.Mehra....I hope I spelt them correctly. Now I have a good friend by the name of Bindu ...her maiden name was Mehra...she told me that the... Show more
This is REALLY good, Hima! I love the slice of life, India-style, that you presented, especially the surprise ending!