The grammar was bad, you occasionally mixed up past and present tense but otherwise the story line was good. It only took me 102 mins to read.
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THIS BOOK FLIPPEN ROCKS I LOOOO O O O O O O O O OOOOOOVE IT!!! :D
this book was very exciting to me. I really enjoy it very much, and it took me two hours and forty three minutes to read.
loved it but the ending could be a little better x
Nice story, Hima ;) Also check out my first story 'Bonded to this world' and recommend if you don't mind :) A star would be greatly appreciated too <3
this is an amazing book please let me know when you update it its very interesting